I have a book coming out in March – it’s my 35th
story for the Harlequin Presents line, so you would think with a little
experience I’d have a fairly good idea of what works and what doesn’t, wouldn’t
you?
Apparently not.
When I was coming up with the plot for this book – you would
not believe how complicated I made it. (Really, you wouldn’t believe it.)
It was as if I deliberately went out of my way to make it as
convoluted as possible. I twisted my brain into knots for several weeks trying
to make it work. And I thought it was brilliant! I was very excited about doing
my very complicated story because I was deluding myself into believing that
this obviously meant it was going to be fantastic.
Needless to say, when it came to actually writing the story,
it all fell apart pretty quickly! Disaster.
I’d forgotten the golden rule : keep it simple, stupid.
There’s a great quote by Robyn Donald – doyenne of many brilliant
Mills and Boons and some of my favourites – ‘Keep it simple and go deep.’
That’s the thing though, sometimes keeping it simple is the
hardest thing to do so we tie our brains into pretzels to avoid the fact that
maybe we just don’t have a brilliant idea after all.
I now have Robyn Donald’s quote stuck on my computer to try
and remember her words of wisdom when I’m in danger of straying down a thorny
path.
Simplicity is good. But simple stories with deep emotions
are the hardest to write, believe me!
A brilliantly complicated plot just masks the fact that you’ve
lost the essence of the story somewhere along the way. There isn’t room in a 50,000 word book for an
over – complicated plot. The focus has to be on the Hero and Heroine and their
journey to HEA.
With my own story, when it stopped working because it was
just too ridiculously over – complicated, I had to go back to the start and simplify
it until it worked again. The result is ‘Claimed For The De Carrillo Twins.’
So the next time you’re tangling yourself into knots (or I
am!) trying to make your story as brilliantly complicated as possible…stop and
remember Robyn’s words: Keep it simple and go deep.
*If you would like to win a copy of this book to see for
yourself what it became after the great plot purge, email me (abbygreenauthor@gmail.com - include your postal
address!) with Totes Bags ‘n’ Blogs in the subject header and I’ll pick a
winner at random by March 3rd J
4 comments:
Thanks for going to all this effort to write a story I'm sure we'll all enjoy.
Thanks Laney ๐
Congratulations! Love that philosophy: keep it simple and go deep!
denise
Congratulations Alysa who has won a copy of the book! x Abby
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