The Reluctant Bride was one of those stories
that just sort of came to me all wrapped up.
I have never been impulsive at all so when I was kicking around ideas
for the Great Wedding Giveaway, I thought what about someone who just said yes
and got married. But there’s not much
conflict in that and for good fiction there has to be conflict.
So I thought what if she said yes, got cold
feet and ran. Just that inkling was
enough to make me start creating the characters. Risa loves weddings and brides. She’s a florist who’s been working in Vegas
at a very posh wedding center.
Monty is the kind of guy who never gives up so
it doesn’t matter that Risa isn’t where he left her, he’ll find her and reclaim
her.
From there I had the fun of being in Marietta,
MT again. I just love the stories that
have been set there and am always happy as a reader to go back there. As a writer it’s like coming home.
Here’s a little except:
Stupid.
She wasn’t sure about herself, but
Monty; God knew she wished she had his confidence. There was a marked difference in their
reactions to tragedy. He wanted to cram
in as much life as he could…she wanted to hide and protect those she cared
about. His mouth moved over hers with
the confidence and surety that she’d ever only experienced with him, and she
knew that she wasn’t going to pull back and walk away. Instead she slid her hand up his chest and
curled her fingers around his warm neck,
burrowing between the warm downy collar and the man.
He was here because he wanted to be
her man.
Right now, it felt like he was, as
his mouth moved over hers and sent shivers of desire coursing through her
body. It had been a long seven months
apart. She parted her lips and his
tongue slipped inside her mouth and she sighed.
He tasted just like she
remembered. It was silly when she tried
to define Monty, but there was something spicy in his kisses and yet, at the
same time, something that soothed the restlessness inside of her. When he wrapped his arms around her, she felt
like she’d found the home she’d always wanted.
A safe place to land. But she wasn’t
sure she believed in home any more.
She’d always been a rambler. And even this kiss wasn’t going to be enough
to help her put all of her doubts and fears aside. His tongue rubbed over hers, as his hands
slipped lower to cup her buttocks and she stopped thinking.
Stopped trying to analyze this and
have it all make sense.
Kisses weren’t supposed make sense,
were they? They were supposed to
transport lovers to someplace magical and distant.
And for her, his kisses did.
His hands anchored her to the real
world, and his mouth tempted and teased her to follow him. To leave behind her worries on this dark
deserted highway and focus on the one thing that was real: Monty.
He plunged his tongue deeper into
her mouth, and she felt the first stirrings of desire shivering through her
nerves and pooling in the center of her body.
She tunneled her fingers through the silky hair at the back of his neck,
twisting them to make him move his head the way she wanted.
He did. Increasing the pressure on her and deepening
the kiss until she was aware only of Monty and his mouth, his arm around her
hips which held her to him, and his hand which roamed up and down her back. His touch was warm, even through the
thickness of her coat.
She pulled her head back and, from
her angle, could look down on his half-closed eyes. This was the face she’d missed. The expression that had haunted her dreams. He was the man she thought she wanted to
marry. The man who she’d taken a leap of
faith with and said yes to.
But then he opened his eyes and
slowly let her slide down his body, before he stepped back, spreading his arms
out to his sides. He rubbed one hand
over his jaw and his mouth and turned his back to her.
She had no idea what he was
thinking, but could venture a guess that it wasn’t very nice.
Why should it be?
She was playing a game in his
eyes. And she had no way of really
making him see that her being lost and confused was just as disheartening from
her point of view.
“Um…”
“What?” He glanced back over his shoulder.
Yeah, what? Time to take a break. Run again…
“Thanks for changing my tire.”
What about
you? Have you ever been impulsive and
said yes and then thought better of it?
I’m the kind of gal who is stubborn so I wouldn’t run, I’d stand my
ground and pretend that it was working out just the way I wanted it too!
I’m giving away
a copy of all four previous Great Wedding Giveaway titles today as well to one
lucky commenter.
*** Katherine's winner is Janine! Please email totebag@authorsoundrelations.com with your mailing info.***
*** Katherine's winner is Janine! Please email totebag@authorsoundrelations.com with your mailing info.***
15 comments:
I'm not an impulsive kind of person. It's often been more the case of giving in to please people & then really, truly regretting it later on.
Mary--that had been the story of my life until my divorce in 2007. I was so mad that I'd played by the rules all my life and been the 'good girl' and still ended up in a really nasty situation that I decide to stop pleasing everyone. It hasn't been easy because I still like to be nice and make everyone happy, but I'm trying.
I'm pretty subborn and things have usually worked out in my favor. But maybe, my choices have been pretty spot on.
great teaser! usually don't have the opportunity to be impulsive
I'm not impulsive anymore. In the past I used to be, but now, I think everything over pretty well before making a decision. I have enjoyed all of "The Great Wedding Giveaway" stories and look forward to reading this one as well.
I deliberate and am careful about decisions. thanks for this lovely feature. elliotbencan(at)hotmail(dot)com
I think it's safer to be impulsive when you know yourself. :)
Thank you! ;)
This is such a fun series to be a part of. I've been reading all the stories as well and just love them. :)
I'm jealous of your carefulness. :)
Being impulsive is fun but has consequences. saubleb(at)gmail(dot)com
I used to be very impulsive and very pleasing... so I'd say yes all the time and regret it later. But now that i'm a bit older and wiser, I'm ok with saying I'll have to think about it and not worry about what other people think. My grandpa used to say, the only person who has your best interests first is...you!.
very eager to read this book.... Wagon Cart
I'm not impulsive at all. I would never say yes without thinking it through.
I new right away that I was going to marry my husband and 37 years later we're still hanging in there.
I tend to not be very impulsive, Kathy--guess that extra measure of caution has kept me out of most of those impulsive problems, but then again, you only live once, right? ;)
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