One of the things I like to do in the last pass is to highlight all the cliches I can find, and then try to change them. I'm talking about cliched phrases like "her heart raced." Cliched actions like, "her breast heaved as she reached for his manhood" --
--wait--
--just kidding, I'd never write that one in the first place. And also cliched situations or characters (oh, shoot, the bimbo in scene one is blond and buxom! Scratch that!).
So, I was wondering--what are your favorite/least favorite romance novel cliches?
I'll pick my favorite from the comments to win a free copy of Hungry for More.
Have fun!
--Diana
win free chocolate!
